rate_review Reviews

I really liked the chapter, but I am confused on one thing. In the previous chapter you said that Winky had a baby boy elf and named it Dobby in honor of the original Dobby; then in this chapter you said that Winky had a girl elf and named it Dimple, which is it? Also, after they rescued Cho & Snape's baby boy you started saying that the baby was Hannah's baby, you might want to go back and check these two chapters for continuity. I know it is hard for the continuity when there is time between chapters so I wanted to point these things out for you. Again, I really do like this fic and am looking forward to seeing who's baby it that Pansy will be having. Personally I think it would be great if she had twins and one is Harry's and one is Draco's. Glad the Wizengamot saw the truth in that it had to be the potion and not either of the boys. Looking forward to the next update.

I reread some of the chapters to remember the story. It remains excellent and very original. Very glad you decided to continue it.

oh update. yay! so was dobby a rare one for being smartish?
i am so looking forward to reading the backfiring of pansy's plans.

I love your history make me happy yes long time wait but each chapter make me feel emotion,sad ,angry ,etc. Sorry for make you feel bad.

Chapt 1-21: I am becoming a "great fan" of your writing as well as this story. I'm also reading "No Outlet for Anger" & hoping for another chapter soon. Perhaps Harry & Draco will have fraternal twins one for each of them or maybe Pansy fooled around with someone else before she got fixated on Draco to raise her status. It would be spooky to be the parent of Voldemort's son...sort of like Damian or Rosemary's baby.

gah, wall of text syndrome.

I struggled through it anyway as i'm itching to find out what happens next... though, what gives? this is the second story update with 'wall of text' going on. Auror and the fountain didn't.

Ohhhhh, very dramatic. with Kreacher triggering the trap, would it mean it's safe for the other elf to come in behind him and pick up the kid? I hope the other elf can get there in time to help.

awwww, that's cute. Har's cousin and his psuedo cousin are getting together. I agree with Duke's name change though. I've alwasy thought Dudley was a pretty pansy ish name and he's no pansy. I'm surprised he didn't get the absolute crap teased out of him at school with that unfortunate name.

I like this history Rrrrggg I need see the next chapter please.

ty for making the effort and for the new chappie.
so, a new young'un to rescue huh. babies, babies everywhere for Har it seems. Here's hoping they can swing it.

blinks.
well, that's a bolt out of the blue.
Could this be the kid they were cross dreaming with? I wonder why Cho would call her kid Cherry Blossom.

Wow Well I hope to see more soon I would lovce to see where you take this. How far along is she anyway at this point?