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person Ash
schedule July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this was a grab story. i love how real it was written. it is definitely their first time and I'm glad you were able to capture the awkward moments as well as the good ones.
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet. Hot, but funny and sweet. Having the dialogue in italics instead of just in quotes gave it a very intimate, dreamlike quality. Less like a story and more like you're peeking into a special moment between them. Very satisfying to the voyeuristic tendencies, that is. ;)
person Stevie
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is, far and away, a much more realistic take on two boys losing their virginities than most fics I've ever read. It's not focussed on being sensual and overly sexy like a porn, but still comes away steamy because of its truthfulness and real-to-life setting. I really loved this fic.
person luvhp
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh, I loved this one, the banter between them was great. Broke up the nervous tension.
person ^_^
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely adorable!!
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cute one-shot
what was the previous Malfoy record?
I imagine Draco fucks whenever he wants
person strega
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Helllllllllo, debauchery!
I laught so hard I think I cracked a rib, so thanks and...LOL!
person twocanz
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good, very cute. I laughed a lot. Nice job!
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, and very hot.
person Iarejedi
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so fucking hot. And it was so honest and adorable how they shared those experiences with each other for the first time. It was really sweet. Great job. :D Lurved it.