rate_review Reviews

This story is intense. It's really grabbed me. I so wish you would continue it.

while the story was very interesting, the summary has absolutely nothing to do with the plot line. Please rectify this so as not to mislead readers, it is a very good piece regardless.

I hope you didn't abandon this story, because I'm really hooked now. Can't quite tell when you last updated, but I hope you're not like those authors who update only twice a year. Please update soon.

Never mind. It seems you already abandoned this story.

Not what I expected, when will the story go in the direction of the Summary? Anyway, interesting story, unique. I like the idea of spells being able to be performed without a wand if they do a ritual, Use of facts is also intriguing, though Descartes did actually believe in god, he simple wrote an epistomology which he built on to proove god existed.

Hey, I started reading this out of bordum in between my two classes. I like the mental picture of Hermonie you are representing here. An insight to and intellectual mind. The other thing I like is the emotional struggle she is facing. I seem to be facing the same thing but not really. As an 18 year old i seem to be asking myself "who am I" all the time. Which in your story is what she is doing as well. One almost insignificant object in your life disappears, or a situation occurs and you find yourself questioning everything you hav known thus far. Look forward to reading more.

Amazing prose. Intelligent discussion of issues.

I am rendered speechless and my mind is abuzz with all of what you have raised.

It's getting sorta dark.
Poor Hermione.

This story is fantastic.

Different but very interesting. Can't wait for the next update.