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by superrogue17

person Anon
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update as soon as you can!!!!
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm only up to chapter 9 at the moment but I'm loving the story already. Beautifully written!
Just wanted to point out that OWLS are taken at the end of 5th year and NEWTS at the end on 7th.
Thanks for posting such a wonderful story!
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person mhaj78
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Good update!! Well done. :)
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Ryder!
This fic has certainly grabbed my imagination and is rapidly pulling me in like a fish on a hook. I am intrigued by how the plot is going to develop the character interactions.
I would love to see some other Gryff/Slyth couples coming together as a direct result of the Draco manipulation.
As far as Neville being a major player I say "Bring it On!" I felt that he was short-changed by JKR in the last book and it should have been Neville that finally rid the Wizarding world of Bellatrix! Okay, rant over.

Hurry and update soon as I'm desperate to read more of this wonderful fic.
Blessings to you and your little brother.
Amethystique x
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just finished Chap 4. Harry and Ron are being adorably bumbly. It's nice that they don't need to be married until 21, so we're not distracted by frantic students.
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. I always love marriage law fictions. By the way, if they are in their seventh year, why is Neville, Crabe, Goyle, Ron and the others in this potion class? They never had the grades to get into that level class. Just curious...
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, that made sense...so...when are you going to actually update?????? lol...i like the story.
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heehee between the Patils getting 'bricks' for partners and previous chapters Draco being thrilled of 'only' being threatened to be hexed, I've had my giggles for the morning! now, afternoon giggles are being searched for.....
person Anon
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good so far, cant wait to read more, please post more soon, i really like this story ans would like to read how it will end.