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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm confused seventh year is NEWTs fifth year is OWLs.... but i like the premise so other then being confused can't wait for more
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I understand your grief of your father's passing, my "uncle" Capt. Patterson just passed away from recurring brain cancer.
*hugs*
*hugs*
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really have enjoyed this fic....I really think that you have to update it though? I have been really patient but it's driving me to the next bed to Neville's parents all the waiting!!!!!
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update?
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. I like it a lot. I cannot wait to read more! My only issue (and believe me when I say I have no room to talk) is that the chapters aren't long enough. I like how you've approached the situation and everything. Great job.
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you intend on continuing this story. I love how it isn't the typical marriage law fic.
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! and want more... please. i love how you explaned nevilles parents ( horribe thing that happened). I love it !....
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! more please, soon
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
[regarding chapter one]
I adore your writing style, it is from Draco's point of view - but written from the eye of an all-seeing narrator who is (like the reader) watching with amusement!
I like his logic in his choice - but not his reasons, he wants her because she is the best academically and the brain behind the trio that brought down Voldemort; he knows nothing of her personality, likes, dislikes, hopes, dreams... in reality they are strangers. but, he did realise that good lucks and money won't impress her, and is swallowing his pride to ask for help.
Nice to see it was all an act (being mean, that is) to keep Lucius happy and off his back - I had wondered... but Hermione's Gryffindor bravery would probably view this as cowardice, rather than personal safety.
He's asking the Gryffs for help? Is he taking a chair and whip to tame the lions who will view him as a nice rump steak? lol.
Has Ron thought about asking for her - or hasn't he realised she's female yet?
I adore your writing style, it is from Draco's point of view - but written from the eye of an all-seeing narrator who is (like the reader) watching with amusement!
I like his logic in his choice - but not his reasons, he wants her because she is the best academically and the brain behind the trio that brought down Voldemort; he knows nothing of her personality, likes, dislikes, hopes, dreams... in reality they are strangers. but, he did realise that good lucks and money won't impress her, and is swallowing his pride to ask for help.
Nice to see it was all an act (being mean, that is) to keep Lucius happy and off his back - I had wondered... but Hermione's Gryffindor bravery would probably view this as cowardice, rather than personal safety.
He's asking the Gryffs for help? Is he taking a chair and whip to tame the lions who will view him as a nice rump steak? lol.
Has Ron thought about asking for her - or hasn't he realised she's female yet?
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
[regarding chapter two]
A very short chapter, but the plot was accute and revealing.
Draco is being wonderfully honest, he doesn't have to be polite to Ron and Harry - but he IS doing.
Harry's slythein nature is showing through! Nice to see him being sneaky and cunning! However, Ron seems to be one step behind.
10/10
A very short chapter, but the plot was accute and revealing.
Draco is being wonderfully honest, he doesn't have to be polite to Ron and Harry - but he IS doing.
Harry's slythein nature is showing through! Nice to see him being sneaky and cunning! However, Ron seems to be one step behind.
10/10