rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I am the one that posted the original challenge, and I loved your first chapter.

Your Lucius is really a bad boy, wonder how he will be once he is a blank slate? Maybe all that nasty is just his upbringing, LOL, or maybe not.

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I keep hoping there will be an update but alas there is none.....sigh. Was that pathetic enough to get one? lol

I love that you took up this challenge! I can

I like it. Please update soon.

Wow awesome story so far. Please oh please add more!

oh. a great beginning and do hope for lots more! i so do love long stories and i really want to read yours so dont disapoint me and continue with your ideas. well, well i do wonder what happpens now-please update and let us know, like really soon!!! :)

I'm definitely intrigued! I'd love to read more and soon! Please?

Chapter 1: Fascinating start with Lucius somehow unfocused on the fighting, but resolute in his commitment to his side in the war. I'm interested to know why Hermione would be missing her wand. I can understand her shielding Nigel, but she's basically defenseless against the blond Death Eater who recognizes and immediately takes advantage of her. Both characters are reflecting canon so far and for that I thank you. My only request is that I hope you finish your story. It's painful to be left hanging with no ending and unfortunately all too common. I'll keep my fingers crossed. 8-)

I am really looking forward to reading more and am so pleased that another great Lucius/Hermone fic has been started as you can never have enough.