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for A ‘very little’ Happy Ending

by Kerstin

schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nio i mean yes but i like it!
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so confused right now. I have no clue what is going on. Draco is just to far out of character. That and you keep jumping from one thing to the next without really explaining anything. I like the story plot though. What I understand of it anyhow. Keep up the O.K. work.

Kat
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 3! Harry called him sweetheart! Poor Harry stays confused around Draco!
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im staying!
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! I love the plot and ideas behind this story but it is a little bit hard to read because of all the editing that needs to be done. Normally, I would offer to help out but I'm uber busy at the moment! Good story, just some touch-ups required... also, minor point but Dumbledore showed Harry the prophecy after 5th year, not 4th..
Stef
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I can't wait for chapter 2! I like that the Slytherin prince is responsible not just for Slytherin but Ravenclaw as well.
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im enjoying the shit out of it!
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Does Draco have creature blood(veela for example)? He said he controlled the Slytherins and Ravenclaw....Is he their heir? Is Harry Gryphindor and Hufflepuff heir?
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it.
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 2!