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Soooo need chapter 8!!! Take a break and study and then write! They are soooo cute!!!

Six more chapters? *Very Happy Now!* Can't wait for chapter 7!!!

No need to thank me!!! I love your stories!!! Soo going to miss this one!!! Wasn't ready for it to end!!! And what an ending! Wow! That was beautiful!!!

His left ear was pointed with at last six rings. This is from chapter two, when Draco saw Harry on the train. That is why I asked if Harry had creature blood. Draco was thinking of all the ways Harry had changed. Harry has "pointed" ears. I was thinking with pointed ears he was an elf or fey. Sorry I made a wrong assumption.

it was very sweet. i talk randomly about everything!

*waves back*

Good story.
As English is your second language, perhaps a good beta might help?
For instance: 'foot' when you meant 'food', and some of your tenses became mixed, as well.
English is my first language, however I read through my stories at least twelve times, before I upload them.
Even this short missive was altered three or four times before sending.
Please tell us some more stories, you have a very good sense of narrative. You managed the tension between the two protagonists extremely well. I like your idea about co-operation between the houses. I liked to see the Malfoy's in a different light, too.
Looking forward to the next tale.
Whitmore.

Wow! Fantastic! I sooo need chapter 6!

I love this story!! Please update again soon.

Sooo need chapter 4! Poor clueless Harry! I'm glad he's figured it out!

I know Draco is part Veela, does Harry have creature blood? His reaction when he saw Nott holding Draco made it seem so. He kept thinking it was wrong and no one else was allowed to touch or hold Draco. Like it was a law or something. He doesn't know he's Draco's mate. I was thinking maybe he sees Draco as his mate, even if he don't know why.