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for A Finer Unconsciousness

by Lomonaaeren

person Fuzzy bears
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was niiiiccce. I feel kinda warm and fuzzy inside. Aw. I think you hit the spot with a birthday present. It certainly made my day.
person Myra
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. This story was, certainly, absolutely one of the BEST Harry/Draco one-shot I've read ever. My god, I LOVED it so effin much. I just simply loved the way you write, the amazing storyline despite this being a short story, the unique sets of Harry and Draco's point of views, but most of all I just loved their very little, YET absolutely perfect interactions. They didn't need words to understand each other, it was just merely actions and mutual understanding that had been going on between them. I really really liked how Harry just simply believed in Draco when he didn't even have any reason to be, I mean they weren't even what you'd call as friends exactly, just two pretty much opposite individuals, but yet he still stood up for him against those (stupid) accusations, and hell, even resigned himself because of the unfair judgment made towards Draco. Just wow, I've re-read this story for like three times just now. Amazing job, and keep on writing!
person Ladynight
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was really good, of course all your stories are. But this one came off so sweet!
person Annie
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how lovely I think this story is. I am so glad you didn't let anyone speak, lest it should ruin the whole atmosphere. And the way you described Harry and Draco was absolutely stunning. The last line was perfect. Fabulous job! :D