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for A Finer Unconsciousness

by Lomonaaeren

schedule May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awsome, brilliant, amazing.

Thank you.
person RRose
schedule May 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! The ending was perfect, didn't need to get any further then that.
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This had a real mellow and sweet tone to it. I really really enjoyed reading this.
person Aynessa
schedule November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful beyond words. I love how you were able to convey everything they meant with just their actions and looks alone...they spent 7 years getting everything wrong by talking, and now they finally got it right without talking at all. Beautiful. Just beautiful.
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this one. Its simple and sweet. It shows how people can change just from a simple gesture. Congats and much love =)
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was quite...soothing. Only two real occasions of talking between at that only included "call me draco" and a spell basically and that made this awesome. I enjoyed that. Their lack of verbal words made this quite beautiful and is a true testament to your ability to write.
person Diane
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really different and quite amazing. To see them communicate like that was really interesting. I see stuff like that all day because everyone on campus has their iPods in their ears, you have to learn to talk without speaking. That's neither here not there. You picked out so many little things, little gestures, and gave them so much meaning. Your writing's amazing and your skills make me so jealous.
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Truly, honestly, beautiful. I can never get enough of your stories.
person LeeB
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story just *flows.* Every step is Just Right - as the relationship develops, I look back and couldn't see it happening in any other way. I only wish this one could have been longer: but there was no place that needed anything else.
Great job.
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I soooo hope there's a chapter 2!