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for Caught In The Act!

by XxXxEmoSlashxXxX

schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't even begin how bloody good this story is!!!!!!!!
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Effing hilarious! Love it, brilliant, funny, sexy, inspired! what more can I say?
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I loved this! All the chapters were great - I especially liked Lily's. And they all had such funny endings... "It was your father's bed at the time!" <-- that just fucking KILLED ME, lulz XD

You should really post this on fanfiction.net, I bet people will adore it :)
person keebz
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* Now this was cute.
My favorites? James's and Ginny's. XD Much love.
DIS TONKS! YAY! *highfive* I really really liked her... until she went after Remy! THAT'S JUST CRUEL TO SIRI'S MEMORY!!!

But this was great fun and well written. Wonderfully done.
person Merrov
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very amusing! I especially loved victims Harry and Ginny. Harry because it was so very funny, and Ginny, because I loved her reaction to it. Very cute!
Cheers!
-GLB
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay i love this fic!!!.... very hilarious... keep writing!!.. later!!..
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Though at first I can admit that I was only curious and desperate for smut when I clicked on this piece, I really ended up liking it and, at a few points, even laughed out loud to myself.

As much as I hate the fact that Rowling kind of skirted around the subject of sex (and was in vehement denial of this pairing's sexual tension) I liked the way that you played on their secrecy-- and the fact that secrecy would be that difficult to find.

+ = Remus dirty talking, Molly Weasley's pissy reaction, Fangirl!Ginny, transition from young to old for Remus and Sirius

- = Would have liked to see more of a reaction from McGonagall rather than fainting (personally she seems the type to be less surprised and tug the kids off by the ear in my opinion), would have liked to have seen a little more elaboration on the Peter Pettegrew chapter

I think you did very well <3 This story deserves a little more than what it has gotten so far. It's far more a humorous than a sensual, arousing story, but the premise is a really good one and it could have gone bad very easily. Good job~
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO - This is epic! i love it! please, do write more of them!

- M