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for As Soon As I Belong

by firefly124

schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter looking forward to next update
person Anon
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!

Super awesome story.

Whoo whoo! :]

Keep it up!
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person CryingCinderella
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the nice comparison to Bellatrix, as I'm doing a portrait in a performance piece on her at the moment, it's fitting. :) Nice twist you've thrown in there, making him paranoid. Yes, Viktor ever the emotional tampon of sorts, secretly not over his Herm-own-ninny but willing to accept that she's moved on even she hasn't accepted that. You've got the characters placed quite well. I'm eager for the next chapter. Snaps to you.

~CC
person Anguloce
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is great! looking forward to more!
person Jen618
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice chapter, and a good mystery for Hermione to solve. Looking forward to more!
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, interesting. If Hermione didn't put the dark enchantment wards on her flat, and Snape didn't either, then just who did? Will be looking forward to updates.
person snapescat
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I'm looking forward to seeing how this goes.
person Anon
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well now, this is a very interresting story. Cant wait to read where it will end. Keep up the good writing skill. That does make a very big differnce in a story. Post more soon please. I will read it. good work.
person gowvan
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"She glared at him. Both of him. She would need to take that Sobering Draught soon."

LOL! Great line, so snarky, I love how you're portraying her. (bows to your muse).