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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have alot, ALOT, of spelling and grammar error. But the plot is really good. =]
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it, i hope you do get to add more to it.
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, how embarrassing to be caught by the three she was just fantasizing about.
The only suggestion, maybe proofread it real good before posting, just some silly errors. no biggie.
Otherwise, COME BACK WITH FOUR , I mean MORE!!!
The only suggestion, maybe proofread it real good before posting, just some silly errors. no biggie.
Otherwise, COME BACK WITH FOUR , I mean MORE!!!
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you better write more! I have to know what happened next. You can't just tease me with not one, not two but THREE sexy wizrads - that's just mean. please update soon.