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just read the first chapter and I loved it! Great job.

i just read it all and i loved it...can't wait to see what you do...i've never read any stories where Lily lived...its kind of weird, but i like it...gives me great ideas for something though...lol

So, so, so good. I'm glad you haven't finished the plot bunny yet.

If they had a child I bet he would be stronger than Harry. I believe Harry got his strength from his mother, he may look like James but he acts nothing like him.

Fantastic!

Lily stands no chance against sex god Severus, does she? That was lovely, thanks! Can't wait for more.

naughty=)

Quoting Adam Ant will always get my attention. Sigh.

'"You didn't think I was in this for purely unselfish reasons, did you?" he said, letting her feel how swollen and thick those particular reasons were just now.' Classic. How funny. And she is fighting her attraction to him soooo hard, bless her. Ha ha.

Excellent to see Bellatrix get hers as well; I bet that little incident was the talk of the male Death Eaters for years afterwards.

But you can't leave me hanging like this, dammit! Update soonest! This has become a favourite with me very quickly.

There you go=)

Ah, great, I love that this is continuing. It's a premise that could lead in all sorts of interesting directions, after all.

"I don't know how much more praise a Slytherin can take" - great line! I want to see if he can bring Lily round or not. Please continue.