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for The Healing

by soldiersgirl0709

person ASwanson
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really do love your stories! Keep up the good work!
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gets better and better. I was laughing through most of it. The thought of the baby peeing on Severus was too much.
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is brilliant (as usual). I noticed this new story a week ago, but denied my self the pleassure of reading it until I had finished another rather lengthy story. I managed to keep my promise for almost a week:-) I absolutely adore this, and I don't care what other stories I read, this one will be on top of my priorities!!! Keep up the good work and update again soon!!!!
person MWolf
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It just amazes me when I find a story and wonder how I missed it in all the browsing that I do! It took a few chapters for me to get into the story and looking beyond the physical scenes, but once I did, I found myself enjoying this pairing and the storyline you are developing here. I've always been a Remus and Sirius fan at heart, but Snape has recently snuck in and the pairing with Hermione is gaining ground.

Your writing shows a level of thought put into the development of the characters and the story. Seeing Snape with a family can be a shocking thing, but it's nice to see a side of him that can exist inside the harsh exterior he shows. Hermione is just as great, showing that soft, caring side more than the "bookish" side that I saw so much of elsewhere. I, for one, will be looking for more to read!
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So understand that. Seems like half the wives I know are on sleeping meds. I just couldn't do that not with kids in the house. Most nights I am up reading fan fiction till I pass out! Got to say if you don't plan it out wow You got talent! feel free to keep busy! You know I will read! I like the depth you really but into the your fics. It's not wam bam thank ya! there is a time and place for that but it nice to see the depth. Really enjoy it.
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello Snape_Goddess, Well I have to say. After a day of shopping at the commissary, I know I am nuts to go on a Saturday, You helped me smile again. Wow when I think I know where you will lead us next you change and show so much depth in the characters and your story! Hugs one Army wife to another! Have a great weekend! I am on pins waiting for your next update!
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, i have never laughed so hard before in my life..brought back some really good funny memories...lol..same thing happend to my husband with our first son,,,damn this is good..you have got to post more soon..great story..
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Apryl
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I knew as soon as I read the words "naked baby" that there was a whizzing wizard scene coming...LOL. And of course the old saying is true: Breasts and toy trains, meant for children but it's usually the men who end up playing with them! Keep up the good work. I'm really getting a kick of it! It's always fun to see Severus fumble with something he has no experience with.