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for The Healing

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww I just love little Sara. She reminds me of Claudia from Interview with the Vampire. I wish you could write one more chapter about when Sara and Sebastian are at hogwarts.
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFL!! I am shocked he didn't wipe out the memory! LOL I have to say loved that!
person ASwanson
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! I really love the story. I look forward to it daily and I keep your husband, my friends and all the other military over there in my prayers. Thank you!
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I am in tears! wonderful chapter!
person Jennykat
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear Snape_goddess,
I wanted to tell you that I love your story, but not only the story but also the text you write under chapters.
I aspecaly liked the writing you had about you husband when your child was born in chapters 12.
I have a brouther in the army so I can imagen what the sene is with a little girl and a big, wide scholderd armyman. Its verry cute indede.
I hope you wil pardon my arrors in my writing, I'm not a native englische writer.
person Domine
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't just enjoy it, I LOVED it. Sara was just awesome. What's next?
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
as I finish wiping spewed coffee off my monitor I am still giggling and the introduction to fatherhood you gave poor Severus....so true...so true.....been there done that.....lol
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the length of your stories! Short and sweet, something i can read and re read at anytime for a pick me up. Loved the ending! the pink robes just made me go awww.. Makes me wonder how Sev would be when his daughter starts to date! LOL
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what man cant resist a good explosion...lol
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.