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for Into the Crucible

by vivlyon

person NightLo
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually I have read this before, and still I am amazed by the way you toy between the two...the feelings and descriptions are just so...real...thanks for this!
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!!
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was...awesome. I loved how out of control you kept the situation, definitely didn't know exactly what was going to happen next but yes, I commend you!
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very powerful!
person kalaway
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely and beautifully written! I'd love to see more.