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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story doesn't have nearly enough reviews. It's the most original, well written thing I've seen on here in a long time. Keep up the good work.
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, how did I miss this update?! It's brilliant, as always. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dallas, TX
FUCK YA!
FUCK YA!
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I like, pumped my fist in the air at least 5 times in each chapter. The pumps doubled after the mentioning of Dallas,TX.
This is fic has brought me extreme joy. Love the writing, plan on quoting this mutha irl a lot.
This is fic has brought me extreme joy. Love the writing, plan on quoting this mutha irl a lot.
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stories like yours are the ones I cite when I encourage people to read fan fiction. So creative, such an ear for dialog, so engaging....I bow to the shrine of Bloodcult of Freud. May I lead your acolytes?
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let me first say, I started off HATING this fic. As in I closed out the window and didn't come back to AFF for a while. But then, inexorably, I was drawn back. I am now TOTALLY HOOKED. I love your writing style... it is so startlingly, refreshingly -real- beyond my ability to express. I am not totally sold on Toby, but I am sure he will grow on me. I cannot wait to see where this goes. Again, I love this... but I don't know why. Keep writing. :)
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Riveting, I am so glad you updated. Your flow of language enraptures me. Please continue, and can I guess at German, since English is not the first language.
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's lines like this that keep me coming back eagerly for more: "...Hermione could challenge him on the sensitivity of his
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was quite dramatic. I've been on tenterhooks for all the chapter, but you left us hanging.
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Squee! I'm so happy to see this updated. Really, really great chapter.