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by AkashaTheKitty

schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was amazing. Yes, I'm a fan of Silencio, but you did this so well. Perfect. Their reactions were spot on and unfortunately rape is a terrible reality of war. Well done. (btw, if you stuck in the beginning chapters of DH, it really picks up speed at the end. You might not be able to put it down!)
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This srory was brillant. I loved how you have written the rape scenes; they were real and brutal, but there was also a small comfert in it that Hermione stayed strong through-out.

The way you defined Draco's character was great, and the idea that he was torn over loving her but was forced to do what he did, was done brillantly.

I like how you left it open, it leaves the reader with alot of un-answered questions, and it isnt tied up in a nice little bow is great. It would be nice if one day you could return to this story and tell us more about what you think should happen next.

Loved it all, and keep going. Your a brilliant writer.
person Renovatio
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... This is the first time in months I'm reading something on the Draco/Hermione section (feel honoured lol) This one-shot was beautifully written, and I hope you'll consider writing a sequel to this. The last part was just perfect, and it explained everything well. Please, do type another chapter (or more chapters!) This is going to become one of my favs!