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for Master

by AkashaTheKitty

schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How do you do it. How did you make me fall in ,love with Draco in this story. It is so dark and he is so nasty. But he is doing it cus he loves her.

Please please I know you said no seqaul but just one more they have to find each other
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story---which is the problem! LOL!! I recently wrote and submitted a oneshot to GrangerEnchanted. I had a couple reviewers say that my story reminded them of yours, so I checked yours out. They are eerily similar. I thought I had finally come up with an original idea, and apparently so have you (but yours was posted first). Mine has a possible sequel and the writing styles are different, but I thought it would be best to make you aware of this and I hope, if you ever get a chance to read my story "Does She Know" at GE, that you don't have a problem with this. If you do, then email me and we'll go from there--the last thing I want to do is infringe upon another author's work, no matter how unintentional!!!
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I have read silencio as well as this and I will just say this before I go on, 'UPDATE SILENCIO'.
Anyway back to Master, it was a great piece of writing and liked how the story progressed, I am not in anyway a Draco/Hermoine shipper so I was kinda hoping that he would be an arsehole and NOT love her, for a change. But all the same the ending was bittersweet and cute in a sickly way. Seriously though great story, with a couple of moments where I felt exactly what was going on ie the poor girl being raped by the Death Eaters. I was immersed in the story and that shows how great a writer you are!
person geo
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As sad as I am that there is not epilog, I loved it anyways. Thanks for writing! I always love your work.

geo
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I swear I could love anything you write, because you do it so well. The ending to this was perfect, and as much as I'd love to read more, I like it as a one shot just fine. Lovely work as always, keep it up!
person Paige
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh you should really make a sequal. About... Maybe the war is over, and they get back together or something! Somehow...

It would be really sweet. (in the "awww..." kind of way.)
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!!
person luvhp
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I truly loved this story. The end was absolutely perfect!!
person Draco'sLove
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I reallyyyy wish this wasn't a onehsot and the story went further. I just thought it was so good and had potential for me.

really enjoy your writing. kept me intrigued.
person xcbbn
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
beautifully written. just, wonderful.