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for Master

by AkashaTheKitty

person mlui
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story, especially how he tried to save her. Even though he couldn't save her anymore, he still was able to send her away. I know you said there would be no sequel, but maybe you'll change your mind in the future? Or at least write a short epilogue...please? Or if someone else continues it, do let us readers know! =)
person jlclark
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! This was such a good story. It is so original and very well written. Someone else had noted in an earlier review that if you ever run out of ideas you could always come back to this and I have to say I think that would a spectacular idea. They met up several years down the road after the war is over the baby is growing up and see what type of relationship develops from there. It is just a little food for thought but since you are the creative genius I am guessing you will not be running out of plot lines any time soon. In any event really great story and I look forward to reading more of our work.
person ace
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you should make a sequel going through the war and everything, you could easily make a novel length sequel, this would make a very good story and i would definately read a sequel.
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So...in my mind I
really convinced
myself that this
was a story.
Made me sad that
it was a one-shot.
I loved the ending though.
And the way you filled us
in on how Draco really is...
Brilliant.

By the way..MAJOR fan of
Silencio. That is one hell
of a cliffie that you left.

10/10 on both stories!
person sa
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was so heartbreakingly sad!!! i feel like crying for him!

i've not read any of your other fics but i will now!! i love your Draco and here, the bitter-sweet ending works so well!
person Catiie
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amaaaaaazing :]

enough said.
person Tootsie
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Let's me correct this, this story isn't one-shot right? I need more. cheer!
person Brilliant Demise
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
an all-time fave
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In some sick way I liked this. He tried to save her because he loved her but couldn't. I know u said u wouldn't do a sequel but maybe one day when u've run out of plot ideas (god forbid) u might continue this... like when the war is over and she has to save him... hmm??

Off to read ur other stories anyway!! :D
person Danielle
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love it!

Sick, right? Me loving the rape stories? Oh well.... I've been corrupted for quite some time now...

I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!

OOC... :P Please I wish all stories were like this... (twisted? yes)