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Don't stress. If it's running away with you go with it. I'm very interested in this plotline, I have to say!

Oh, I am digging this one Figgy ! Usually, Hermione is either a virgin or nearly one. We usually see her begin as as a completely different entity than she is beginning in this story. I look forward to what you're going to do with her in this one. And of course, the coup that Severus is going to lead. I also look forward to see how Severus is going to get Hermione to feel (hopefully). I love it when your brain takes off . . . we never know where it's going to lead us (hopefully a naked Severus is somewhere in the vicinity *smirk*). Anyhow, I very intrigued as to how this will turn out!

Oh, and though I like the appearance of Odessa, I'm with Jaylynn. My favorite original character of yours BY FAR is Adam the Queen Vampire (with Marcus being a resonably close second). I have a friend that his character reminds me of SOOOOOOOO much!

Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter in every story you have going right now. Anything you post at this point would completely and totally ROCK FACE!

oh oh Chapter 5 already! lol I love it. Glad to here you don't have writers block...it can be such a pain. Poor Hermione she is so cold, I hope Snape can warm her up.

(Marcus is just under Adam with me too...If only a cock like his actually exsited, well a girl can dream, lol)

Another fantastic chapter! Very much love this story and how fast your updating. :D

well I'm thrilled you got another chapter up tonight, but it is sad... Nice work.

I read some of your stories before becoming a member and I already can tell this is going to be so good. I absolutley love the way you write Severus! Even when he's threatening he's seductive and you really know how to present that in his mannerisms and characteristics about him that others think make him unnattractive. Anyway really looking forward to an update of this and A New Beginning. Goodness I can't believe Hermione had to actually be a prostitute! Its really intriguing to think of Voledemort winning the war and just what Severus would do in such a scenario. To be honest when I started reading I thought maybe you were going to have him loyal to the Dark Lord but the angle you're taking is so much more interesting. Severus is still forced to wear the facade of a loyal Death Eater and I really can't help wondering if he plans to do anything to remedy that and the Wizarding World or if he couldn't give a toss as long as he survives. I'm sure Hermione doesn't plan on giving in without a fight obviously as she accepted Severus as her choice rather then dying. She really is brave giving herself to her hated former teacher, I mean for all she knows he loathes her and could do anything to her. Given that type of situation I don't think I would be brave enough to live. I'm really interested to see how their relationship plays out in this universe. Keep up the writing its truly amazing and the lemons you write have got to be the most erotic things I've ever read. -Marauding Lady

Do you sleep Missy? This story has started just as intriging and compulsive as your others....with a touch of wry humour perhaps...or not? I'm referring to Sev's interaction with his lackey. But you do this quite often. What starts off sometimes quite light-hearted then develops into something quite dark and usually intensely erotic. But as always there is a PLOT and a jolly good storyline. Where the hell do you get all your ideas? Absolutely amazing! Do you dream them or is there a touch of the fey in your family. Apparently my brother was born with a caul over his face as was the little boy in "The Shining" but he's about as fey and magical as Billy Connolly......he's a big hairy Scotsman too. Anyway no doubt you are going to keep your literary secrets to yourself but don't keep all of them. Share some with us. In the words of Wayne and Garth "We are not worthy". Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx. P.S. Hope you are well.

I don't know where they come from. I can just be sitting, thinking about a story I'm working on, then another scenario will pop in my head and just stay there until I write it out. It's usually just a scene, and this was the scene, then the reason for it came afterwards, Voldemort figured out what Harry was, Harry who is a born martyr turns himself over, Voldie takes him and wins the war. Snape, since everything was all messed up, continued to play his role. Is he still trying to kill Voldie? :::shrugs::: Who knows. Maybe he wasn't . . . until Hermione popped up.

She wasn't obliviated when she saw Harry.

Shame shame starting another story when you have two already that I am waiting to read. This is interesting but I am wondering if this is going to be a full story or not?

Jay: Sigh. I don't know either, girl. My muse is acting up on me. I think she's bipolar like me. lol. We'll see what happens.