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schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank goodness. I was so close to tears before they had sex at the way she was so indifferent and then when she explained she was sterile, that was just so sad. I could have cried to when she started to unthaw while he was engaging her. It was a very weird sex scene and yet at the end it was good. I was starting to think how much she was becoming like him when you pointed it out to, hipefully he'll melt her a little bit more and keep her pluck up and she'll do the same for him god willing. Great so far! -Marauding Lady
person pittwitch
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MOST EXCELLENT! As always, thanks for sharing. Pitt
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting fic. Cannot wait to read more.
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol I like when you use some of your own characters over but so far my faviort is Adam the Queen Vampire. I get a huge grin on my face when I find out he is making his appearance...it also means his boy toy isn't too far away( gotta love a posessive vamp).
person ChaosProphet
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh. my. GOD!!! write more, just, more! this hermione is fascinating, both in what she has become what she still has the potential to be. snape is also quite interesting, with his simultaneous service to and hatred of the dark lord, and the brainstorm of reaction to harry's survival. the death eater dystopia you have created is at once disturbing and compelling. im dead serious, write more!
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! OoO! I absolutely love this plotline. :D
person Jen618
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another story?? You've started another story??? You're doing my head in! The prob is I'm hooked on all of them. Sigh.
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So the changes begin. Four chapters in one day...you must have writers block on your other stories don't you?:) Oh well I am glad I get to read this instead of nothing.
person Ms_Figg
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jaylynn: No, it's not that I have block. I know exactly what's going to happen in the next chapter of ANB and in IAAU. Actually I pretty much know when I finish the previous chapter what's coming next. It's just a matter of writing it out. But I have to "feel" it. lol. Strange I know. Right now, this scenario has kind of taken over my thoughts so I have to write it out.
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mwhaha! Excellent! :D