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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I like the story, even if it's a little twisted. Is this a totally dark fic? Will Snape soften up just a little? Just wondering; I think I'll like it either way.
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting spin from the usual. But I'm confused. In ch4 Odessa was last seen outside Hermione's room, wand drawn. What did she do? Did I miss something?
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry Quarter-Witch. I thought it was clear Odessa had followed Snape's advice and did nothing. I think I will add a line in the following chapter to clarify that. Author error. Thanks for pointing it out. ***
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it very much already looking forward to the next chapter
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOO! What an excellent twist to put in with the chapter! :D Granted, I was expecting Snape to mention a plan at some point, but then was quite the surprise. LOVED IT!
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah i love all your stories, and I really love this one!! Please tell me if this is going to be a long story just need to know, please!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wicked: I don't think this story is going to be that long really. It's kind of a PWP/adventure with a little plot. I'll try to put a lot of exciting action into it though. :)
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! That was brilliant. I loved how you wrote that... it felt cruel but of course redemption had to be coming our way. Excellent. 6 chapters today??? Amazing. I know you said pwp but not too short, please.
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how you do it,this is another great one,I can't wwait for more,I would love to be Hermione in the last chapter!
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoohooooooo! And he's already working his Slytherin cunning to form an uprising. Excellent! And you know he could pull it off while making all the prep work look like it would benefit Voldemort. Alright Sev! Gods but poor Hermione. She may still want to live but its like she has no soul now. Given her situation who wouldn't be? I had to laugh at the chapter titled, Enter the bitch, lol. I really hope Severus gets to follow through on his threat to kill Odessa. What a tart. Anxious to see what happens next. -Marauding Lady