schedule
September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit. I was like...wha...complete? No way.
This was a fun interesting read.
Thanks!
This was a fun interesting read.
Thanks!
schedule
September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"I have to admit Snape was kind of channeling me when I was reading DH and all that dialogue." I had a long bit after this but my own silliness deleted it. I was agreeing, and also saying that often in fic, Hermione is doing a lot of talking during the smut, and there is NO bigger turnoff that deep and meaningful relationship discussions during smut... well, not in my experience with men (or me either! ) LOL ROFL... But it loses something in the way I wrote it before.......
schedule
September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story!!! What a great ending. The confrontation with Voldy was priceless....i agree with you that there was too much talk in the book at the final show-down. I like your much better. I still feel hurt for loosing Snape under such petty circunstances. Reading you has brought much comfort.
Thanks you are really great to read.
Pianita
Thanks you are really great to read.
Pianita
schedule
September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a nice ending :-) I smiled at the last two sentences and that you let one wonder how their relationship was like then.
I guess, it became a little more than hermione being his personal bedwarmer ;-)
I enjoyed reading the story thoroughly,
thanks for writing this :D
I guess, it became a little more than hermione being his personal bedwarmer ;-)
I enjoyed reading the story thoroughly,
thanks for writing this :D
schedule
September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the ending! It was kinda sad to see her spirit so broken but you left so that there is hope for day dreamers like me that they come to love each other in the long run! Yea look at the run on sentence. Now we know why your the writer and I am just a reader and fan! LOL Like the idea in the story of him trying to fix her. Instead of the typical fan fics where she is the one always fixing the bad snarky bad boy Snape. Wonder new view!
schedule
September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent ending! :) Loved the last bit with 'snapey'. haha
schedule
September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I remember it was supposed to be short but am I wrong to want it longer?
schedule
September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why is it that teh same scenes from the novel written with your original prose make this such a more plausible fiction? I love your work dear, please continue :D
schedule
September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the ending. i had a bit of a sappy hope that they would fall in love, retrieve hemriones eggs, and make snape/granger babies for several years before settling into a romantic/affectionate routine life with kids and grandskids crawling out of every door of snape's mansion. but they aren't that sappy, and they are damaged and your ending feels more honest than my sappy dreams of a happily ever after. i like that you left us knowing that the would be content to be together for the rest of their lives.
schedule
September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol! Lovely!! Great ending. Although, "quite monogamous"??? So, they were mostly monogamous for the rest of their lives? That's how I read that. I'm not trying to nitpick but it stuck out. Anyway, it was a great story and I really enjoyed it all. I really, really understood HG at the end. Very, very much so. It was well done!