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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 4! Draco and Blaise should send a note to the King and Queen. To make them worry is uncalled for. *smirk* Well the good thing is Tom thinks they've escaped.
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...they are princes and princess!!! Well...well...well...as Harry is in peril danger (from Tom), if ever Draco can get proof and show his sincere love, as he is prince of Egypt...then he can make a good proposal to James...same apply to Blaise and Ron.
BTW, would Raven get her chance? And who will she pair up with? And...I like the idea of tying the snakes!!!
BTW, would Raven get her chance? And who will she pair up with? And...I like the idea of tying the snakes!!!
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey update soon though, i hate to mention it but i think you need a beta. i'm sorry if this offends but it's cramping your style of writing and it's dragging you down. KEEP IN MIND THAT I LIKE THIS STORY. i wouldn't be reading it this far if i didn't! a lot of the mistakes that i saw wouldn't have been caught by just a spell check. even if you had someone just proofread it, it would help you find and fix the mistakes. update soon *kisses*
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!!! This is the funniest story I've read in a while, I really like it. Please update soon. Oh, by the way what does Dumbledore has to do with the kidnap of Harry, Ron and Raven?
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How do you raise a penguin in the middle of a desert, more like how is a penguin going to stay alive in all that heat!!!???
And why does a ordinary penguin from the wild have a locket and a picture, both human technology that animals does not know how to use?!
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And why does a ordinary penguin from the wild have a locket and a picture, both human technology that animals does not know how to use?!
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This starts off interestingly, please update soon!
BTW, would Draco know about Tom's plan? And how's about Harry, Ron and Raven parents??? And Pansy, Hermione and Dean? Would they help?
BTW, would Draco know about Tom's plan? And how's about Harry, Ron and Raven parents??? And Pansy, Hermione and Dean? Would they help?
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I DON'T like Draco. He is an ass hole. If you still need a beta, I would be more than happy to help. My e-mail addy is princess52287@hotmail.com
Keep up the great work.
Kat
Keep up the great work.
Kat
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I hope you keep going. Keep up the great work.
Kat
ps. Don't let Voldie rape Harry. Please. That would just ruin this for me.
Kat
ps. Don't let Voldie rape Harry. Please. That would just ruin this for me.
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh tooo funny! Sooo need chapter 3!