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BTW, I have totally in for Sasuke x Naruto....all other pairings are nothing compare with them...just like Draco and Harry, they are dedicated for each other!!!

Ron has falled for Balise...and how does Harry feel?? Actually this is very important!! And what secrets of Harry can Raven disclose to Draco?

Ron is so cute!!!!!! I mean wanting to look good for Blaise, and I can't belive Harry took so calmly the date thing, I'm glad he is supporting his brother. On the other hand there

Will Raven help Draco? Please tell me Dumbledore wasn't stupid enough to put them in the dolls! Sooo need chapter 6!

The plot and concept is well thought out and the flow of your story is quite fun. Please, please, please go through spell check before you load your file. I am really enjoying this story but there are a large number of spelling errors, like when you wrote clam for calm (or at the end in your a/n when you wrote flour it for floor it).

So Ron is already falling??? I knew it, I mean he has a bad temper, but he isn't as stubborn as Harry, and Blaise isn't that much of an asshole, as Draco is sometimes, so the road was easier for them. What Tom is doing, well its just creepy and disgusting!!! but I think his attitude really adds to the story. About Pansy I LOVED THE SLAP HER MOTHER GAVE HER!!!!!!!!!!!! She really deserved it. Anyway, change of subject, is there going to be someone for Raven? Is that someone going to be Severus? It's just an idea that popped into my mind, after all, Severus and Wormtail (eewww!!!) are the only other male characters you have mentioned to be at the palace. Well in a few words, I liked this chapter and I hope your update soon.

...Pansy is still Pansy, I am just hoping she will not do something stupid, e.g. help Tom...

BTW, being a king, should James not send all people out already? Or would he consult opinions from his loyalties or a magician???

good chapter.

The tech was referring penguins having any tech at all.
And the thought of Snape caring enough to get the pic for the penguin is almost as disturbing as having him 'personally'[nicely] put it on the penguin. After all, he is not a nice goody person here.

But the portrait was funny. XD Voldie is such a weirdo

What happens in chapter 5? Can Draco not win Harry over?

I'm loving this!