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for The Desert Jewel

by kitsuneEmpress

person Nikte
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated!!!! I really liked this chapter, but I must say you were a little mean, you promised that Raven's man will be coming, who is he?!?! Well, you get a big box of chocaltes, thanks so much for the smut xoxo.
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Tom is ready to put his plan to work. I sooo need chapter 8!
person NightLo
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...they are finally together, with intimate contact and vows and promising future~~~ would they be too love-blinded to notice the lurking darkness?
person amazingZ
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the plot seems very interesting all by itself. the grammer ruins it though. i'd try for a beta. also, try to be more descriptive with your sentences. it'd help your story a lot.
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 7!
person NightLo
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...again, this is just too short...can you update sooner? As we have waited for a while...
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the fucking fantastic work.
Kat
person tash1021
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is soo cute^.^
...but shouldn't ron an harry send a note to their mom
person alma
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person NightLo
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BTW, I have totally in for Sasuke x Naruto....all other pairings are nothing compare with them...just like Draco and Harry, they are dedicated for each other!!!

Ron has falled for Balise...and how does Harry feel?? Actually this is very important!! And what secrets of Harry can Raven disclose to Draco?