rate_review Reviews

chapter five anyone?
please im in love with this story!!!!
sirius was such an ass!!!!!
black is soo sweet
i mean i know sirius was just pissed and jealous but thats no way to treat the girl hes in love with!!!!!
anyways please please please write chapter five!!!!!!!

opps i said chapter five...hehe
i was too distracted by the story to think straight
lol
see what u do to me?!
lol
but yeah chapter six PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love the attitudes by the way ,so charming and sexy
both of them.

Sirius smiled warmly winking easily at the young witch still trying to keep her composure.

chapter 5 was great also hun.

funny thing this is, a review from the past.. hehhe anyways.. GOD I LOVE THIS! and let me tell you I really do! firstly because well, its awsome and well written and just enough plot.. and secondly there's just not enough sirius-hermione fics out there, I mean they dont even have a name, like dramione :P so its good to see a real fic and not just a onshot, those a great too, but sometimes you just need a storyline ;)

OMG! this is so brilliant! pretty please update soon? lots of love :)

I LOVE THIS! please tell me it's complete somewhere, i need to know what happens. please i'll beg!

Hey there - not only are you an incredible talentes writer, but this is absolutely one of the hottest stories I've ever read. I really hope you plan to keep it going! I've read a lot of other fanfiction (and you have some wonderful work... your ideas are fabulous and you seem to have gotten into the characters' heads) and I've only reviewed a fic twice before, if that tells you how good this is. This and the Art of Love. I didn't even like Hermione/Sirius fics before finding your profile.

Your dialogue is amazing, quite realistic - the characters say what they mean without being overly explicit, and the flow of your conversations is natural. I love the way you set the scene, pulling me in so I feel like I could be there, and you write Hermione's POV so well that I feel like I know her. There are many who have good story ideas but are unable to articulate them well, or who can write but choose typical plotlines - I feel like you've managed to avoid these traps. In short, you're quite a talented writer and I enjoy reading your work.

Do you have any sort of mailing list for when you update your fics? I'd like to be on it, if possible. Or maybe you should start one - I'm sure I can't be the only one desperately waiting for you to pen more chapters! Thanks for writing, keep up the good work.

-Emily

OMG, excellent story. Please update, and I am going for older sirius!!!!