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for Come and Play

by soldiersgirl0709

person tootie
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why can't Luscious,oops, Lucius really exist? Can't count the number of times that I've fantasized about tying Goldylocks up and having my wicked way with him and of course afterwards he can't live without me. What the hell did I do before nasty little Malfoy fanfiction came along? Love your way of thinking and I am also enjoying Match. I'm from the seventies, so that brought back some memeories also. I like sense of humor also, I get tired of the ruthless deatheater sometimes, even Lucius must laugh at times without losing his haughty dignity.
person siriwolf
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story!
it's so hot!
person Domine
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You already know I love your writing. Awesome! Hair pulling is the best.
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heeeheeeee * snort* *giggle* oh that was goooooood......

loved the Draco/Lucas bit at the end too!
person kittycat30
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had no idea! What a great story!!!
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo cute:) Great job. I was hooked from the beginning of the oneshot. Lucas? I wish I could have had read more about him. He sounds like a true little slytherin already. And Draco was here as well. My favorite wizard. I can't wait to read more of your work.

Lady Serpentina
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, you get my first reveiw ever on AFF--even though I've posted stories, I don't usually review. However, I love Lucius (yummy) and this was very good! I never expected them to be married, although perhaps I should have. The Lucius in my story is a bad boy, so it was nice to read one where's he's good! *shivers*
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story, very hot and a nice little twist at the end. good having Lucius tied up for a change.
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! Loved this story! Great Job! Keep up the great work.
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: You've captured both Hermione and Lucius beautifully, showing each of them at their confident best and done it all in a one-shot. The plot was tight and intriguing right from the start and I was swept into the maelstrom of an exceptional bit of smut. Adding the glimpse into their daily lives at the end was like a lovely frothy dessert after a gourmet meal. Wonderful writing and great characterization. Just superb.