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hi,
ive read "the proposal" & "the wedding". I like them both very much. The recent chapters you had to rewrite have a different style, compared to your older ones - less repetetive. though i cant decide if it is better or not. Anyway, I enjoyed reading them.

a longterm? reader

Fantastic. I've read both your fics and I love them both. I can't wait for more I'll be watching out for more! This is fantastic. My only complaint is that JK announced that Neville marries Hannah Abbott, but none the less I love the story and your work keep up the great work!

so i just had to say this, but the part where you wrote that Mack was talking in a cockney accent was brilliant. I have never seen anyone write that accent well enough to be able to understand it. I am only half way through ch10 but I am loving it. I wish you updated more than once a week. oh well, I guess I will have to live with the antisipation...

~Erin

i loved your first story and this one is just as good. please update soon. keep up the good work.

YAY!!! I love seeing new chapters in this story!

Hey, great story. Thanks for updating. If your looking for constructive criticism, I'd say try to watch out for misspellings or repeated/dropped words. If you need help as far as beta-ing or proofreading, just ask and I'll be more than happy to help. Otherwise, I think it's a wonderful story and I love it. So please, keep up the good work and continue with the story.

I loved that chapter.. Very long, took me a bit to read.. But well written and fun.. :) I love the walking in on people bit..

please dont tell me its dudley...........

YAY!!! a Wonderful chapter and I can't wait to see who it is!! somehow i'm betting Dudley... weird!

I just found this and your previous story recently, and I've enjoyed them very much. I must say, it is evident that you much great thought and effort into them, but there is little evidence of proofreading. For me as a reader, I find it very frustrating to have to pause in order to figure out where, if any, punctuation or missing words go. Yes, I understand it may be tedious, but a well put together story will be more read throughs and more read throughs will get you more of those reviews you so love. I know that I often stop reading stories if I have to do too much work in reading them and using my Trelawney-level of ESP skills to guess at what the author meant or thought s/he was saying. I am glad I did not do so with you.

I look forward to your next update.