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for Riddle's Revenge

by Kasen

person Mary Beth Noble
schedule August 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love Riddle's Revenge and the various twists and turns that you've put the characters through. It's is so like 'JKR's' work for HP. please
continue the story if you have the time.
schedule March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So I know that's it's been a really long time since you've wrote anything in this story but will you please continue this? Once I started reading I couldn't stop and I'd really like to read more!
person jujukitty
schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ack! ran out of story, need more, soonish preferably! loving the story, great characters and the plot is deffinately intriguing. one small note, in the beginning leon has the french accent, after that chapter, it's gone? other than that, great job (and bringing back snape?! awesome lol) keep up the good work, can't wait til the next chapter
person Daoryn
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi There!
I really like your story very much so far.
I like Al and I like Scorpius. (He's so clearly Malfoy and just as clearly different which makes me like him even more.)
My heart nearly stopped when Al got bitten, that was so mean of you! But between Teddy and Bill he'll not have such a hard time I hope.
I absolutely adore the boys for trying to bring back Snape. That's brilliant. Especially for such a smaal thing as a good prank. (I liked the line where Snape wass told he had no choice in it muahaha).

The only thing I don't really like is the whole transformation issue and the 'wolf form'. I mean, it makes everything sound so easy again and takes the edge of the whole wherewolf-thingy completely for me. (Though I like how you describe Bill's role in this).
Also I don't really get why Harry wouldn't want his son to get the wolfsbane. I mean, most would agree that the wolf inside is rather scary with all the loss of control and probable self-harming and such things...
I mean, probably you have a reason and I just don't see it yet?

Oh and I wanted to thank you for the twins, I agree with the others that a good HP needs its twins =)

Ooooh and the potential of Gale and his Mother. VERY interesting indeed! Can't wait to see how that will be developing.

All in all I am SO looking forward to another chapter. Thank you for writing that!!
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really Really REALLY like your story!!!! I hope you keep it up!
person Pie
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've absolutely loved the story so far, it's been really gripping and exciting, I like the characterisations and the idea of bringing back Snape a lot. A couple of spelling and grammar mistakes, but I'm a grammar freak so I notice that kind of thing.

I'm really excited to see what happens next! You have to keep on writing, you can't stop now, I need to know!!!
person Slippy
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm hoping HOPING *HOPING* this story isn't on hiatus or dead or something equally as depressing because this is one of the most amazing pieces of fanfiction i've ever read. please keep up the good work!!!
person nox_lumen
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
grrrrr. you have not finished the story yet. and snape is still dead.(shakes fist angrily) write more or the dark side may take the cookies back. and i'm still mad at that movie 6. they took out most of the violence. if you could write more chapters it may make up for that though....
person Kitten
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hii Hon. I would really love for you to continue this story. Even though Scor and Al haven't gotten very close yet, I have really fallen in love with your writing and I can't wait to read more.
person Lils
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cracks up* That was hilarious. Dude he's everywhere! lol.