rate_review Reviews

I know I am saying this again, but I love this. It is just the right amount of happy and sad. I still cried when I read it, but that is just a sign of how great a writer you are. If you can make someone cry just by writing, then that is a sign that you are a wonderful writer. Keep up the fantastic work.
Kat

This one actually made me cry.

The intense bond between the two of them in the first part of the story made the end that much more painful.

I yes, I actually cried...

I stand by my comment about making the readers feel the characters.

I loved this so much

Okay, now I have to say the last two paragraphs are completely unnecessary...so I'll just ignore them. But dear Merlin...them making love was absolutely beautiful. I'm really glad you've entered the fanfiction world (where we're all equally insane :D ) and I'll be hoping to read more works from you! :]

Poor Harry and Draco! How heartbreaking!

Truthfully, I don't mind Draco as an uke or a seme, I just like Draco. And another truth that I won't hide, you're story was depressing as hell. Beautiful but depressing none the less. You are talented and I hope to see more from you. You had me crying for release too, lol. I read this because it was a oneshot, and half way through I was hoping that you would change your mind. Not that I was going to beg for you to. I hate when I write a oneshot and they ask for more. I mean they're relationship just seemed so hot. I was thinking that the twist was going to be that Draco had to marry someone else. Then I got to the end. And my spirit drooped. Who would have thought that self sacrifice and suicide was the same thing. I wonder if the former as illegal as the latter. Great story, even if it was depressing, and thanks for sharing.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole

That was one of the sweetest things I have ever read. It was not the saddest however. If I could remember the name of the author, I would give them the credit, but I can't even remember what the story was called. I did love this though. Keep up the great work.
Kat

I liked it... right up until the last two paragraphs. I always get so sad reading bittersweet fanfics. *sniffle*

I really liked it, but I would've liked it better if it didn't have such a sad ending. You did such a wonderful job describing every detail of Harry and Draco's first time, and I could clearly feel and see everything as if a movie was playing in my mind. So much emotion, so much beauty! Well done!

I think the story was good. I'm just not into sad endings, especially w/ Lucius sneering in the background. I really love seme Harry. Maybe it's because Harry was the seme on the very first Harry Potter yaoi I was introduced to. It was a Doujinshi & the title of the story was Innocent Drop.