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ooh interesting who are the guests? I wont guess as it seems to distress you so. lol. He he i so love this story. Your killing me with that four chapters hint though! Oh well i guess i'll just have to wait. i loved the bella thing and the dishevelled snape, that was funny. i can just imagine mummy Bella.

ooh and as for how i guessed, i just look at a story n think now where would i take it. Majority of the time i'm right. Its fun especially when reading or watching a mystery, n i have a nack for cluedo. Anyway rambling as per usual, cant wait for next chap. I wanna see the guests. Ooh and i want to know the assignment that the 'unknown' death eater has. Do the other DEs know who it is or not?

Love this, see ya soon.

Fantastic as always. I just love Harry with an attitude! Definitely cool him slipping in the sexy taunt though, good to see old snake face loose a little bit of composure lol.

love it

Let me first say, I enjoyed this story so far and will be reading the rest.
However, I had to force myself to go through the begining, you need to find some alternative to commas.
It needs re-writing, or at the very least, re-puncuating. That may sound harsh but it's true. I enjoyed what you had written but it hurt my eyes to read that many commas in so smaller space. Repitition of "however" in the first couple of paragraphs should also be changed.
Other than that, I liked the story. Hope this improves your story, it's good.

Wow reading about those two while they flirt was really fun especially what was really on their mind. Did I interpret it right, are the Weasley twins and Charlie on Voldemorts side, was Charlie the Death Eater that Voldemort was talking to when Harry and the other came

Update again soon

Well i loved it! Was the death eater Charlie? Or is it Remus? Either way i cant wait. Out of all the Weasleys i love the twins, bill n charlie the most. Ginny the very least. Urgh, hate her. Oh and by the way YAY YAY YAY, Remus n Sev, Remus n Sev...woo woo woo, so happy, so happy. (does little happy dance, going 'oh yeah, oh yeah').

Ok now that my little psycho moment is over, i so love this story, Deimios, ooh i love that name. Does it really mean Fear? So cool. Bit of a shame Tonks is dead cos i quite liked her, but thats the whole point int it, wouldnt be as much of an impact if it wasnt someone you like.

Hhhhmmmm for my death list, well Ginny, obviously. Ron and Hermione are little bitches so they need to go too. But i'd love a bit of torment for those three, not quick deaths like Tonks. If you're going for a complete role reversal it might be an idea to have Harry kill Dobby, he saved him once but now its bye bye. If he has a contempt for life then what will happen at school will he hunt in the forest? Would he kill Hedwig if he got too hungry? Can he even have animal blood?

Ooh there is so much to think about here. I love it, i love it, i love it. Update again soon.

glad to hear the plot bunnies are under control
I'm happy to also see an update, I love authors who update
more than once every five months lol
anyway, it was a pretty good chapter, don't stress the small stuff too much.
I liked the last scene, but it seemed a little...tense *grins*
perhaps they just need a good shag to get it outta their system.
Oh, I was a little sad you killed off Tonks, please don't kill off the twins
though, I love those guys.
I wouldn't mind Ginny dying though, never been too fond of her.
Anyway, keep up the good work and please update soon
*throws you magic cookie*

fun stuff. what's better than sex, blood, and violence? answer: not much. keep up the good work.

This story already has me hot. Please continue.

Way to go tab! I LOVE "when harry met voldie"! I like that they instantly started flirting hopefully the relationship progresses just as fast. Don't doubt yourself you are an excellent writer and this chapter was fantastic! Love ya 2!