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person Rokkis
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I actually like Sev in this. This is what he's really supposed to be like. A man with no great morals, expectations or sense of all encompassing duty to the light. He's bitter, selfish, harsh, mean and a complete bastard and what he's doing to Harry is really slowly killing him:D Looking forward to Harry's meltdown and the following discovery from Albus of the illicit affair his potion master was involved in:D Doesn't really matter if HArry never really said no, as Sev was supposed to be the voice of reason:) *grins*

Cheers!
person kunitsu
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my I do hope Severus will survive the interrogation. Now I think Severus is in denial of his feelings about Harry
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOO! MORE!!!!
person Ladyraistlin18
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh!!! What happens next??? *tears hair out of head in anxiety*
person Anon
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't remember if I reviewed the last chapter, but meh.

I hope Sev's going to be OK! But judging from that ominous end to the chapter, I don't think he will be :(

Update soon!!

OH, and congratz on finishing your finals.
person Jilliane
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 29)

I was thrilled, as always, to see you've updated, but....aaarrrghhh! Chuffin' cliffies!!! There ought to be a law!

Poor Severus, although...he did know it was coming, so he ought to be prepared. And poor Harry, left behind, feeling the pain of Voldemort's fury, and not knowing what's happening to Severus other than that it's pain. Or, so I assume, although I don't know do I? Cause you've left it a cliffie!! Update!


Btw...

"...he was assaulted with a blur of apologies."

Great line!!

person Jilliane
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Damn AFF! It cut off the end of my review!!

I meant to say that "....he was assaulted by a blur of apologies." was a great line!!!
person Klen Kagome
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh what an evil cliffie ... grrr ... I think I lost a couple strands of hair while reading the end! Please please please ... don't torture as for too long >< I so much want to see Severus in Harry's arms with some of hsi stubborn resistance down *dreamy state* But we need him alive for that, don't we? You get my point! ^^"
person Helical
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! My word, your Severus gives me the vapours. That aside, I like your style... even if you do leave us with undeniably cruel cliff hangers. Please update soon.