rate_review Reviews

Your story is quite unique. It took a few different twist. I curious as to what will happen in the coming chapters.

KCK-Lumcer

ARGH! How long will you keep us in suspense???? Come back! You have to finish this!!!!

I've read the whole thing in a couple of days, and I love it love it LOVE IT!!!!! I don't even know where to begin reviewing this... I can't say anything intelligent after reading a mega-hot Snarry story that leaves me breathless, so perhaps when I recover I can come back here and do better. Until then, THANKS MUCH for the fantastic read!!!!!!!

I only have 1 complaint: you write BEYOND AMAZING sex scenes (almost better than anyone else), and yet you don't write enough of them... you make us weak with anticipation, almost as breathless as Harry, but then you cut the scene short and stop describing what goes on. That's EVIL!!! (j/k!) I'd love to see more detail in later chapters.

oh my.
please add another chapter
or I will die.

=)

omg this story is amazing.
its killing me right now.
i cant wait 4 more! =D

This is one of the most brilliant, in character, engaging pieces of fan-fiction I've ever read from any of the fandoms I associate myself with. Besides a minor grammatical error here and there, this story is, without a doubt, almost perfect. I was especially shocked to find it here on this website where there are (regrettably) so many poorly written fics. It is truly a gem. Not only are the sex scenes well written, but they seem natural and actually *sexy*. I thoroughly enjoy Neville's subplot, and you've left me tingling with fear for Snape's fate. Harry's "Come back" just about killed me. He is such a sweetheart. I hope Snape is alright, because it's very clear that he is developing strong feelings for Harry. I also can't wait until the (pardon the pun) shit hits the fan because the drama in this story has such potential! I sent an email in to join the mailing list, and I'm so eager for the next chapter.

-Mike

OMG, can

I want to properly review this fic, but I think every wonderful praise I want to give you would keep me up all night. Just know this, this fic is imaginatively three-dimiensional, perfectly IC while still allowing for unique character development, and in depth, while being intensely exciting and wildly sensual. Thank you!

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Evil EVIL you are! how could you do that ;-; you better not pull another long gap or i do not know what i shall do.
Ive tried to find other HP/SS fics to sustain my erm needs. But its just not the same. so update please! :]

OMG. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!! It says harry was in pain but severus wasn't even interrogated yet at the end of the chapter!!! -i'm going to DIE of impateince/frustration/and the what-happens-next-feeling in my chest!!! Please update soon!