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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Probably the first Harry/Snape that I've managed to keep an interest in for awhile. I'd like to read more please...
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I CANNOT PUT INTO WORDS HOW EXCITED I AM TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER BEING UP
I just read them both instead of watching my movie and it was totally worth it |D;;;
Can't wait to see the next chapter, greatly looking forward to it. Poor Severus. He deserves a nice, big hug and a kiss for putting up with this.
I just read them both instead of watching my movie and it was totally worth it |D;;;
Can't wait to see the next chapter, greatly looking forward to it. Poor Severus. He deserves a nice, big hug and a kiss for putting up with this.
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your style, to be sure. You have an almost devilish way with words and masochism. I do like the way you've portrayed Severus, he is utterly believable and human. Also, please to be updating soon.
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... this is fantastic. I just read everything you have posted in one shot... Fabulous. Absolutely fabulous.
I adore the dub-con dynamic, and the stockholm syndrome Harry. I think my favorite bit about the snarry dynamic you've built is Snape's emotions toward Harry. He clearly has some positive feelings toward Harry... what they are I don't know, but the fact that he was able to use (and you must mean it to use it) the Cruciatus curse on Harry during sex completely blows my mind. I think your Harry is painfully accurate - noble and self sacrificing and so STUPID... you can see the subtle changes his time in the dungeons have wrought, but he's still unwilling/unable to really face up to his own culpability in his life.
I love so many things about this work... so much of the interaction is subvocal, so when Snape actually points the obvious rules they'd been operating under out to Harry, it draws me (as a reader) in further because I can honestly feel Snape's disdain for Gryffindor idiocy. I'm reviewing this from a phone, so too lengthy of a review is impractical, but I really adore the marvelous characterizations you've done here.
Thanks for sharing this piece!
I adore the dub-con dynamic, and the stockholm syndrome Harry. I think my favorite bit about the snarry dynamic you've built is Snape's emotions toward Harry. He clearly has some positive feelings toward Harry... what they are I don't know, but the fact that he was able to use (and you must mean it to use it) the Cruciatus curse on Harry during sex completely blows my mind. I think your Harry is painfully accurate - noble and self sacrificing and so STUPID... you can see the subtle changes his time in the dungeons have wrought, but he's still unwilling/unable to really face up to his own culpability in his life.
I love so many things about this work... so much of the interaction is subvocal, so when Snape actually points the obvious rules they'd been operating under out to Harry, it draws me (as a reader) in further because I can honestly feel Snape's disdain for Gryffindor idiocy. I'm reviewing this from a phone, so too lengthy of a review is impractical, but I really adore the marvelous characterizations you've done here.
Thanks for sharing this piece!
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August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*dies by turning into a puddle*
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
... Okay...
HOLY CRAP!!!
Not only was the sex hot! But the story is actually really good. I love it!
HOLY CRAP!!!
Not only was the sex hot! But the story is actually really good. I love it!
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August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For the love of god, keep going!!!!!
SERIOUSLY SERIOUSLY SERIOUSLY
I love these little sparks of affection between the two... and if I may make a request, I would like to see Harry tied up at some point.
Keep writing!! Pretty pretty please with whipped cream and shackles on top!
SERIOUSLY SERIOUSLY SERIOUSLY
I love these little sparks of affection between the two... and if I may make a request, I would like to see Harry tied up at some point.
Keep writing!! Pretty pretty please with whipped cream and shackles on top!
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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, please update soon.
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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to come back to this story? I love reading it!
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you sort of cut up actions into many short chapters. you could easily combine them to make a few decently long chapters and the story would flow much more smoothly. you also start alot of chapters with 'and' or 'but' which is gramatically incorrect.
on the plus side, i absolutely love how you've characterized snape and harry! you managed to take something so completely out of character (them sleeping together) and make it so believeable!
update soon! i can't wait!
on the plus side, i absolutely love how you've characterized snape and harry! you managed to take something so completely out of character (them sleeping together) and make it so believeable!
update soon! i can't wait!