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person Ellanath
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this just seeps with sensuality. Wickedly slow telling of this very good story, setting the reader up for his/her own climax when we finish reading this story!
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!! This is bloody wonderful!
person ,,
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
noooo cliffffyyyy!
person cherie
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That has to be the hottest sex scene I have ever read. Okay know I just have to remember to breathe! Keep writing th goodness!!!
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, just when i was about to scream, you stop! Oh my god... this is a horrible cliffhanger! It was a short chapter too, but it was full of tension. I wanna know what happens. Please do update soon
person kunitsu
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn now that Harry is starting to get past his denail this story is getting hotter every chapter even without the smut. Severus can sure be mean, damn cant wait for the next chapter so update soon
person shadow
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is brilliant!!! i love this story!!!
person Suki
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Arg! Cliffhanger! Please continue! ^_^
person myniephoenix
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, is there more? i want more! this story makes me feel greedy.
person zoef
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story and I was so happy to see you updated it! Excellent chapter, but please update more soon!