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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAHOOOOOOOOOOOO
AWESOME CHAPTER. loveitloveitloveit. what does dumbledore want?! where is neville?! EAAARHG!
and i lol'd at snape's placement of harry in the library.
ps: is there any type of muggle equivalent for exsensus? ;)
AWESOME CHAPTER. loveitloveitloveit. what does dumbledore want?! where is neville?! EAAARHG!
and i lol'd at snape's placement of harry in the library.
ps: is there any type of muggle equivalent for exsensus? ;)
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hate you. and thats meant in truly the best way possible
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot! But...Horrible cliffie!! Update soon!!
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy shit, this is the hottest snape/harry i've read in a very long time. Congrats and keep up!
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh well you did say that the next chap is on it's way so update soon *kisses*
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I didnt expect that the Cruciatus curse would be turned into pleasure because of the first spell that Severus used, very nice way of using it. Now that cliffy was just mean but it did make me smile when Severus thought "Of course Albus make yourself at home". I'm kinda nervous as to what will happen in the next chapter so update again soon
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sat down and read the first 18 chapters all in one go, and all I can say is....WOW!
Stories like yours are what keep me coming back to this site. Every once in a while a gem like this pops up and makes all the waiting (and wading) worthwhile. I can't compliment you enough. This story is beautifully written, particularly Severus, and you've done a marvelous job of keeping him in character while letting his even darker side come out.
Scorchingly intense and compelling; I can't wait to see where you go with this. It's definitely one of the better stories on this site. Please update soon.
Stories like yours are what keep me coming back to this site. Every once in a while a gem like this pops up and makes all the waiting (and wading) worthwhile. I can't compliment you enough. This story is beautifully written, particularly Severus, and you've done a marvelous job of keeping him in character while letting his even darker side come out.
Scorchingly intense and compelling; I can't wait to see where you go with this. It's definitely one of the better stories on this site. Please update soon.
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh! Now there is a cruel place to end a chapter.
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Dumbledore is too funny.
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sighs dreamily* Snape is such a sex god in your story. You portray him so domineering, so hot and be that as it may, I have a fetish for a dominatingHarry!Snape *sighs dreamily all over again and fantasises about THAT voice*
Anyways, onto your story. I absolutely love the flow of your sentences. You have a nice, vivid writing style and I can almost feel the decadence and sin rolling off (particularly when you write about Snape, his possessiveness and unhealthy desires.) I am curious to see what Neville's going to do! (or not do)
As with all your readers, my main gripe is your painfully short chapters! But you update fast, so I suppose it balances out :)
Good job!
Anyways, onto your story. I absolutely love the flow of your sentences. You have a nice, vivid writing style and I can almost feel the decadence and sin rolling off (particularly when you write about Snape, his possessiveness and unhealthy desires.) I am curious to see what Neville's going to do! (or not do)
As with all your readers, my main gripe is your painfully short chapters! But you update fast, so I suppose it balances out :)
Good job!