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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i. love. this. story.
believe me, i've read umpteenth snarry fics and this is so one of the best i've come across. though in some points i don't agree *completely* with your portrayal of their characters, you almost always get them spot on. and the tension between harry and snape in the first 6 or so chapters had my toes curling. it really was so deliciously done. also, the way their relationship is developing is so realistic, i absolutely love it. and i can't stop reading and i personally usually read unfinished stories because i hate cliff hangers. so please continue! i am a devoted fan now!!!
thank you for this wonderful piece of fiction.
believe me, i've read umpteenth snarry fics and this is so one of the best i've come across. though in some points i don't agree *completely* with your portrayal of their characters, you almost always get them spot on. and the tension between harry and snape in the first 6 or so chapters had my toes curling. it really was so deliciously done. also, the way their relationship is developing is so realistic, i absolutely love it. and i can't stop reading and i personally usually read unfinished stories because i hate cliff hangers. so please continue! i am a devoted fan now!!!
thank you for this wonderful piece of fiction.
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yup this chapter still has that poetic flow to it and I absolutely love it.
I am starting to see the more emotional side to this story, meaning I am seeing a deeper relationship between them in this now. It's simply wonderful :D
I am starting to see the more emotional side to this story, meaning I am seeing a deeper relationship between them in this now. It's simply wonderful :D
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Harry's so cute <3
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, that was painfully short, but very intriguing!! Hmm.....what could this new desire be?
Dying for the next update......
(and thanks for the mention! :D )
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWW SNAPEY
see you saturday, pretty girl! <3
see you saturday, pretty girl! <3
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh!.. A twist! Severus gets new ideas. I like it very much. This story is almost scorching hot, and if there are any grammar or spelling mistakes, I can't seem to remember any. Keep up the good work.
CV
CV
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES YES FINALLY!! Oh Snarry porn, how I've missed you!
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh you updated!..I can't read this now, as I'll have to reread the whole story *sigh* My memory is so bad. I do remember it, don't get me wrong, but not enough to appreciate the new chapter. You will be hearing from me soon!
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow what a chapter, this makes up for the long wait. This had a poetic feel to it, they way they interact in the bedroom, how Severus talks to Harry makes it even more sensual than before. You writing has changed a bit, for the better to.
Update again soon
Update again soon