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person Lain872
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i. love. this. story.

believe me, i've read umpteenth snarry fics and this is so one of the best i've come across. though in some points i don't agree *completely* with your portrayal of their characters, you almost always get them spot on. and the tension between harry and snape in the first 6 or so chapters had my toes curling. it really was so deliciously done. also, the way their relationship is developing is so realistic, i absolutely love it. and i can't stop reading and i personally usually read unfinished stories because i hate cliff hangers. so please continue! i am a devoted fan now!!!

thank you for this wonderful piece of fiction.
person kunitsu
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yup this chapter still has that poetic flow to it and I absolutely love it.

I am starting to see the more emotional side to this story, meaning I am seeing a deeper relationship between them in this now. It's simply wonderful :D
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Harry's so cute <3
person Jilliane
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Ooooh, that was painfully short, but very intriguing!! Hmm.....what could this new desire be?


Dying for the next update......


(and thanks for the mention! :D )
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWW SNAPEY


see you saturday, pretty girl! <3
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh!.. A twist! Severus gets new ideas. I like it very much. This story is almost scorching hot, and if there are any grammar or spelling mistakes, I can't seem to remember any. Keep up the good work.

CV
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES YES FINALLY!! Oh Snarry porn, how I've missed you!
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh you updated!..I can't read this now, as I'll have to reread the whole story *sigh* My memory is so bad. I do remember it, don't get me wrong, but not enough to appreciate the new chapter. You will be hearing from me soon!
person kunitsu
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow what a chapter, this makes up for the long wait. This had a poetic feel to it, they way they interact in the bedroom, how Severus talks to Harry makes it even more sensual than before. You writing has changed a bit, for the better to.

Update again soon