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It's such a shame this story was never finished. I was sort of hoping there would be more chapters when I logged on. In fact, it was the only reason I've spent a few hours re-establishing my account here. I love the mood of it, the imagery, the details, the style. I guess it's bordering on insanity to hope that You still check the e-mail Your account was created on, but on the off chance, I was wandering if You had more written? Even a rough sketch? I'm ding to know where this story was going...

CV

Very interesting fic. I hope that you write more. Keep up the good work!

NO!! Please don't leave us hanging like that! What does Snape say? Please, please update!

Awesome work. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how this continues to develop. May I just say, you do an excellent Severus! I'm a bit jealous of your writing skills, I must admit. I've been working diligently on mine because of those like yourself ;)

wow
brilliant story...brutal, captvating, addictive.
I couldn't stop reading and now i'm speechless.
i hope it will be continued

Madame Minuit

Not one author's note after you leave the story for I can't remember how long... I can wait forever for this story, it's that good, but I hope you gain some inspiration soon or something. Update soon!

I AM SO MAD AT YOU! I've reread this story a hundred times I swear and STILL NO UPDATE. You got me addicted and now I check back all the time. This is the best story on this site AND I NEED MORE BEFORE MY HEAD EXPLODES DAMN IT! It's driving me crazy I need need need NEED to know what happens next.

I just reread this for who-knows-how-many time and once again, I am completely and utterly in love with every facet of it. Your descriptions come alive and resonate off of the screen, creating such vivid imagery that it's impossible to not see it. Your characterisations and dialogue are so realistic it's impossible to not see the characters saying that.

Once again, I have realised that this is my favourite piece of fanfiction ever, and that it is so wonderful that I could never get tired of rereading it. No other piece has, after this many times, continued to make my bones ache with the intensity and the eroticism and make me smile.

Absolutely stunning.

Damn! your cliffhangers person! It's starting to get intimate in a different kind of way, a more caring way and I wanted to see the change in them! Your story is intense, and fascinating ride of erotic and fear and confusion and it's breath taking to read!

So I started this story unsure of whether it would meet my hopes. It exceeded them. This was absolutely wonderful, the characterization sublime. I wish there was a bit more of a closure, but oh well. Brilliant story. Snape was absolutely the way I would imagine him to be.

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