rate_review Reviews

Not bad, a few mistakes but you kept the suspense that you'd built up. I'm going to venture a guess and say the boy he saved was Blaise. It's just a guess. I want to say more but I really don't have much to say. I was surprised as hell that Draco had been the one to kill James Potter. I was flabbergasted, and the way it was done. I mean with as many bullets as he used he couldn't have been to recognizable. Some how I didn't find it as surprising that he killed his own father, I'd already guessed that he couldn't have had a great childhood. And you're right it can't be rape if you enjoy it, can it? There's a part where you typed the color red as read.

Nicole
MisstressNicole@hotmail.com

i love the ending of the chap! no im the devil!

Sooo need chapter 4!

Oh My, that was utterly sweet in some parts & intense in others, loved it!

i love it !!!:) XD

awesome chapter!

*shivers*

...this is good!

This story is really interesting. I can't wait for more. You are one of the better authors on this site. You have a few mistakes, mostly typos but nothing big. I'm infatuated with the story line. You don't find stories like this everywhere and when you do they focus mainly on the love/romance then the action/drama. Draco seems so powerful in this. This story is amazing, even with only two chapters posted. We get to see Draco's personality but we don't fully understand it. Your character developement is gradual and I like that. The story doesn't seemed rushed. My sister has a fanfiction site that is realitively new, and she's trying to get it up and running. As I see stories that I think are great I ask the authors to post them on her site. Now I'm extending this offer to you. We are trying to build a base of stories and authors that actually can write and are good at the skill. You fall into this category. You can find her site through the following link. theStorybook.telayout.net.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole

Holy moly! Chapter 3 please!!!!

I really love this story, going back and forth to the present as well is something that I like. I wonder what they did to harry though.