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for Desperately

by MysticRaven86

person KraeHi
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sweet, They would make such an odd but cute couple. I would like to see more please, good job!
person DB1
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@8 sad but sweet chapter, update soon

*DB*
person Ele
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I find myself liking the idea of Draco and Loona together... and this version of Draco in general. And the raven is fun, too ;).
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a good chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't believe that Lucius is trying to get Hermione. I hope that Severus protects her from him and get whoever it is that is to accompany her everywhere. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
person DB1
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@7. cool story update soon

*DB*
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lavender needs to have her sluty ass kicked by hermione for ever thinking of try to take severus from her
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.