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by LadyKat

schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohmg, omg this story was amazing, beautiful, sorching and intense, it is so interesting and weird and original all in one. The smut is fucking amazing and the story is well written, and I honestly hope u keep up this story, and I am a fan so i hope u update soon.
person Anon
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Delicious, simply delicious. I look forward to more. :)
person luvhp
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Heaven's thank you! I'm so glad you came back, I absolutely love this story. That last chapter was beautiful! Wonderful! So full of emotion between the two. I do hope you are able to continue this along.
I can't wait to see them together, fully, with no one else invovled, just teh two of them, *sigh* loverly!
person chyara
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
did you abandon this fic?
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic. I was hooked from the first chapter. Can't wait for more. I love that you went for the smut right away and slowly introduced plot to it. Five stars, totally. You hit this one out of the park. Way to go!
person HoneyB9
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i cant believe u actualy have one story,u write like a true professional writer
person SeayKat
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there. I first read this story a little while after chapter 4 came out and I loved it! Your scenes are amazing and detailed and VERY HOT ;) I was looking for stories that were updated on the 25th because that was my birthday and since this story is one of my all time faves I feel that it was a special present for me :) I am greatly looking forward to the next update and I hope this story will have a happy ending, in more ways than one.
Kat
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh yay!!! I was hoping that Draco and Hermione would go this route!!
person bean1498
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh very nice! I'm totally enjoying this. Your scenes flow so well and they are so sensual...mmm. :) I hope you're not like me and the type that updates in spurts over the course of like two years. :) I am really looking forward to more and seeing what will happen. Lovely, lovely work and enjoyable to read.
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh!! I'm all flushed....great writing...please update soon?? xx