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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome i love it .. please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see where you take this story next!
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm....very, very interesting! I just love Mrs. Weasley. I hope that you expand more on Luna's reaction to Ron. I love her. She's one of my fav characters. :D
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't mess with Mrs. Weasley!! I can't wait to see her explode and read him the riot act!
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Go Harry!!! While I love the Ron/Luna ship (almost as much as Harry/Hermione), I want nothing more than Harry to hex Ron into oblivion right now!
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September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it...but I felt like the revealation was a bit rushed. I wanted to see more drama in there. It also left me with unanswered questions like who was the girl? Hopefully you delve deeper into that subject!
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good storyline... The writing could be a lot better, though..
You should describe more.. Try to vary the choice of words..
Hmm.
The characters are quite well done, although the admitedly slip out of character at times.
You should describe more.. Try to vary the choice of words..
Hmm.
The characters are quite well done, although the admitedly slip out of character at times.
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an awesome story!! it is so hard to find a good harry/hermione story but you've really got a great plot happening hear! I can't wait to read more please don't forget this story it would be such a waste as you're clearly a talented writer keep up the great work!!
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start please continue I'm very anxious to see where the story goes from here. You are a fantastic writer. Please update soon :) and btw happy birthday from 3 days ago just saw on ur profile that 9/8 was ur birthday. Anyways keep up the good work as usual.
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far and I can't wait to read more