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There are a few ways to proceed with this story line.
The angst lover in me wants to see Harry get taken advantage of by Jon; be it rape or emotional blackmail to make Harry leave with him.
The 'Happy-ending-lover' in, me wants to see Harry be strong and be able to stand up to and kill jon, by accident or not.(and stand trial)
Other ways to go would be...
Have Harry die saving his baby.
Have Lucius die saving Harry and their son.
Have Jon kill the baby as revenge on them.
Have Harry get taken to America, and have Jon turn out to be under the spell of someone else(Death Eater).
Have a Death Eater swoop in and save Harry, but only to take the baby themselves.
Either way, neither Harry, Lucius or the baby, should be able to walk away from this unscathed. Maybe Lucius will try to kill Jon but Harry will stop him, proving once and for all (to Lucius himself) that he is past his Death Eater days?

Lots of options. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.

No, Harry should not be raped. Although he has gone through the thought of losing his child, he knew he did not! As part of his absolute belief in that fact, that he loves Lucius and is not sleeping with him, and the fact the he just gave birth...it would be nice after all he has been through, and for mothers everywhere who could be in this position, to see him KICK THE GUYS BUTT!!! Harry is not a normal wizard and has the power to get out of this situation, especially with two children at home and one in harms way. He also has a very powerful, life-experienced husband who would like to have piece of this guy too. So, maybe Harry starting to kick his butt and Lucius coming in to help would be a good way to go? What do I know, I'm not a writer, but that scene would make me happy! :-)

Still loving the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

In my fervor about Harry, and after reading other reviews, I have to agree that Severus should not be with this woman. Except... Severus was given another chance after his big mistake and may decide she deserves one. I personally would not give her another chance, but may understand if you want to. Severus helped someone kill Harry's parents and only by chance did not kill Harry, he regretted it and worked the rest of his life to pay for that, maybe Severus will see that in this woman. I'm not sure your readers will like that, I'm not sure I will, but I thought I would mention that I could see the connnection.

You have done a wonderful job with this story and thank you for asking our opinions. Then again, as you know, they are only an opinion, I really think you are doing wonderfully on your own.

Thanks again,

Morgana

wOW...I JUST DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY..JUST WOW

I really have enjoyed reading your fic. I think Jon and Harry's confrontation should get rather rough but have lucius or severus get there before there is anymore damage done to poor Harry.

till next time <3

I truly hope that Madeline and Jonathan both go to Azkaban!!! I hope Sev and Lucuis get there before that bastard does something to Harry!!!

Please update chapter 29 soon ^_^

Jan

If Harry does Jon I will hate you
so bad. I will become emo and
ditch this story. I swear I will.
I don't care that it shows how
much Harry loves Alexander,
I will ditch this story. So
don't do it!!!

NEway, adoring the quick update,
can't wait for the next chapter. Which
better not involve Harry/Jon sex. Or
I will go emo.
Really.

Later!!!

Poisoned Quill

Oh, I can not believe that Healer Jamison would do such a thing! I hope Severus sends her to hell for hurting both of his friends!!! Truly I hope you don't have the bad taste to pair up Severus and Jamison after this!?

I can't wait to see what's to happen in chapter 27!

Jan

Ohh that jackass professer. I knew he was up to no good. He can't let Harry go, so he wants hurt him and Lucius in the worst possible way. And to top it off he's using his cousin to do it.

Please add more soon Misty.

What a thing to happen to Harry and Luc.
Jon that bastard took Harry's baby boy he is so dead!
Another Great chapter and I can't wait for the rest of it!