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Query about Chapter 23

I have to make a comment here (don't worry, my full review will come once I reach the latest chapter) but on their honeymoon, Harry laid face-down for the massage Lucius promised him. Hmm...not at 7 months preggers he won't. Belly be too big and it's not comfortable nor exactly good for babes. Let alone preggers with triplets! Realistically, he'd be as big as 9 months along already and probably will give birth early because the human body can only stretch so far.

Sorry, but technical details that appear to be incorrect hurt the overall believability of a story. Now, if you want to give an explanation how magic can make it all possible, that's fine. But you've already stated that Harry's belly is showing enough to make him 'waddle'.

On another note, I'm still enjoying this story very much and I'll stop my lecture and get back to reading. Please don't get upset with me, it's only 'constructive' critizism.

Well, Harry might have let himself be degraded, but he was prepared to do whatever it took to get Alexander in his arms. Good job. And while he may be a magickal powerhouse, he did just give birth to (probably) magickal triplets, leaving him in a depleated state. A difficult but not impossible situation, and Harry never did know the words quit or give up.

....and yet another cliffhanger. Damnit, where are my crampons? *digs in closet*

new reader

this isn't the end is it?
i hope not
keep up the great work and post soooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye

There's my Harry...YAY Lucius... You're Awesome love the chapter

NOOOOOOO please do post a chapter soon because omg this was so good i'm so happy and practically bouncing off the walls. *weeeeeee* now UPDATE! PLEASE, SIL VOUS PLAIT, POR FAVOR, ONEGAI?

NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

Please update chapter 31 soon !_! I need to know what's going to happen now! What is Mimsy going to do?

Jan

I can't wait for the next chapter <3 its been great so far <3

I normally don't review or send emails, but this is a fan letter. I have been really enjoying this story very much. I even added the two songs to my playlist after reading them in the story. It nice to see my two favorite villans get to be actually nice for a change. I cannot wait to read the ending, and I love the names of the babies. Although I really wished for a Tristan, that was the name of my first grandchild, who sadly died this year. Please keep that name in mind for future stories. I would consider it a small tribute and a great favor. Looking forward to future stories and to the end of this one. Warmest regards and blessings to you and yours. Paganwoman

That cliffhanger was particularly
evil, I'll have you know. And if
you really need a beta, I'll do it.
I'm in a bit of a fanfiction slump
and could use something to do. Love
the chapter, though I am still emo
and the only reason this story hasn't
been abandoned by me is that Harry
wasn't ACTUALLY raped, though, really,
that's just splitting hairs.

If you need a definition for any of
those torture devices I listed, here's
the sites I got them off of.

http://www.tofm.org/papacy/torture.htm

http://www.geocities.com/affectivetorturechamber/methods.html

Feel VERY encouraged to use all of the
devices. I'd say feel free, but they're
not mine so that would sound stupid.
Might I suggest NOT using the guillotine,
though? As that seems uninspired.

I am now off to dig for Remus/Harry, my
current kink. Happy early birthday!!!
Hope you have a good one!

Question: Why is the baby named Alexander on this site and Damien on the HPfandom site?
Are there any other differences besides the baby's name?