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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, does Lucius have competition, alittle jealous! good chapter.
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lucius come to the rescue once again. so when is he going to find out about the baby? dont rush it though. i'd like to see him squirm.
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAGGHH!! Poor Harry! Getting trapped by Jonathon in an alcove! I just hope Lucius doesn't get mad at Harry after finding him with Jonathon. I love how you portray Harry. He handled the situation at Malfoy Manor in the morning so perfectly and he was so nice to Malfoy after he saved him. It was perfectly done! Your story is brilliant. Can't wait for the next chapter. Until then! :)
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! Misty you go girl! Great job on this chapter. I thought it was great. Please add more. Your a great friend, I never thought my story was that great. You boosted my convidence. Please add more.
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! Is Lucius going to find out now?? I can't wait for your next update.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow a good story 'and' fast fast updates! Nice. Actually for someone who's lacking a beta, the spelling and grammar aren't too bad at all. You probably don't need quite so many exclamation marks though. It's kinda over kill when every second line is an exclamation. Especially when the person talking isn't one for a lot of that kind of inflection... like Snape for instance. (Could you really see him talking like that; "Oh I'm just ever so happy and excited!!!!)But seriously, you're doing a great job. Can't wait to see what happens. ^.^
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow awesome update. Poor Harry, he just can't a break. I have one question: Please say that you are going to get Harry and Lucius togeth? Other than that great chapter. Please add more.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this rocks! =D i'm in for the ride!
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No, you can't leave it there!!! Please, more??