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October 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM
I've read this far and the fact that this ends in a Lucius/Harry pairing is quite disturbing. A relationship built off rape sounds very healthy
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April 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
errr... Excuse me but I do have several question even maybe you won't read this...
But, why Harry even explained to Lucius about malnutrition and such? isn't that will make more sense if Harry be like "That's none of your business, Malfoy. I can eat any vitamin I want and you can go f*ck yourself. You're the one who raped me back then and hate me to the core, why suddenly you act like you care? what are you playing at?"
and second question, did Harry truly a DADA Teacher? why he's so careless that he's set no defense tool like sneakoscope or such at his quarter? and Harry is look like too weak for himself, did he? why can't he defense himself against Chamber? I know probably it's the plot to make Lucius appear like hero in jelousy, but that's doesn't make a sense...
don't count this as a flame, I like this story... :D
But, why Harry even explained to Lucius about malnutrition and such? isn't that will make more sense if Harry be like "That's none of your business, Malfoy. I can eat any vitamin I want and you can go f*ck yourself. You're the one who raped me back then and hate me to the core, why suddenly you act like you care? what are you playing at?"
and second question, did Harry truly a DADA Teacher? why he's so careless that he's set no defense tool like sneakoscope or such at his quarter? and Harry is look like too weak for himself, did he? why can't he defense himself against Chamber? I know probably it's the plot to make Lucius appear like hero in jelousy, but that's doesn't make a sense...
don't count this as a flame, I like this story... :D
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September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I LOVED this story, especially how realistic the start was (making both Harry and Lucius take time to fall for each other). I'm also really glad you used Damian's version of "A Bird Without Wings", he's AMAZING! :D
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August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it I read it twice
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July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this thank you..
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story was amazing you did an excellent job on it:)
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October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
from the beginning to end, i loved every step that was taken in this story!
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February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!!
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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a dynamic, wonderful, interesting, sweet and adorable story! Lucius was a cad...which made him sexy as hell, and I loved how he fell in love with Harry while still remaining in character; and Snape just sounded HOT, HOT, HOT!
A couple of grammer mistakes...eg. use of whither for writhe: two wildly different meanings, especially during sex lol...in NO way detracted from the enjoyment of the story itself. You are a writer...and it shows. Keep on doing it and with each story, skills are honed and one day I shall ask you to autograph your new novel at your book signing!
A couple of grammer mistakes...eg. use of whither for writhe: two wildly different meanings, especially during sex lol...in NO way detracted from the enjoyment of the story itself. You are a writer...and it shows. Keep on doing it and with each story, skills are honed and one day I shall ask you to autograph your new novel at your book signing!
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I love it very much and I'd like to translate it into Hungarian, if you give your permission. I read that you permit to use the plots and/or characters to your completed stories in anyway we wish, and we can adopt your stories, and fix them up, but I don't know if it is apply to translation too. So if I can receive your permisson, please contact me, I wrote down my e-mail adress(chii-chan@freemail.hu). Thanks! ^^
Chii
I love it very much and I'd like to translate it into Hungarian, if you give your permission. I read that you permit to use the plots and/or characters to your completed stories in anyway we wish, and we can adopt your stories, and fix them up, but I don't know if it is apply to translation too. So if I can receive your permisson, please contact me, I wrote down my e-mail adress(chii-chan@freemail.hu). Thanks! ^^
Chii