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for If You Would Only See

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bloody brilliant all i can say, looking forward to next update
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! it's so captivating. update soon!
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this, I really, really liked this! I feel sorry for Draco, but I am happy for the friendship he has with Hermione. Maybe Luna could get closer to Draco? I know he is damaged, but it should still be possible for him to have someone who loves him in a more romantic way, if there is will there is a way, and he still have other bodyparts working:-)
I am happy that Severus got to know Hermiones true feelings about him as her professor and as person. I am not sure he would have belived it if he hadn't known that she spoke the words beliving them to be in a dream. I hope you will let them meet in real life soon, I want more Hermione/Severus smut and Draco could need a father figure and friend like Severus. Keep writing and update soon.
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! this is an amazing story! update soon!
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy all of your fics. This and The Bond are two of my favorites on this site. I check a couple of times per day for updates and when you update, I am very very happy. You really manage to keep the plotline while making sure there is plenty of lemons, often with a hint of lime.
person Carine
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Snape-Goddess,
Imust tell you that I really feel ashamed (deeply blushing!!)that I didn't review earlier.I read all of your great stories that you put on AFF since your affiliatio and I must confess that I am already an addicted fan to your fanfictions.Unfortunatly my children (11 and 14 years) are still off school for another two weeks and we have only one PC that has to fit for the whole family (myself and my husband included)So I was very busy using my time on the PC(between my childrens Msn-ing and our holliday-occupations)to stay tuned to the current fanfiction updates that I didn't write any reviews for a long time.But I must tell you that I cannot wait to read more of your great work.(and meanwhile review regularly)LOL Sureves Epans
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am very impressed with this story,,very well written,,please continue with this story...i hope you dont start making the chapters shorter,,need longer chapters,,,i can just see the thoughts running through your head as to the story line. please post more soon.
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope draco will keep his hands off of hermione so she can be with severus only.